I think it has a good message and a good song to go with the sort of message that it is. I think you chose a inspiring song and it was good to see what sort of pictures you thought went with the lyrics. I liked the message you chose and think you did a good job in presenting your moving image.
I don't think the music suited this song very well, but it could be because I've heard the real song and the music isn't similar to it. In one slide, you missed some words; You typed: 'Do you ever feel buried six feet under?' instead of: 'Do you ever feel already buried deep? Six feet under'. Also, most of your slide's writing is a bit too small. One of your slides pictures didn't really suit the lyrics: 'As you shoot across the sky-y-y' with the leaf background. All of the other lyrics suited the image. This song had a great message that you tried really hard to express, and you succeeded. The two slides in the first verse where you used dark blue writing, it was sort of hard to read in some areas of the screen.
I think that this song is a good song to do as it has a good message. I am not sure about the music. Some of the images didn´t match the words, but most of them did. The words didn´t really stand up against some images, but otherwise, the video was good.
I think it has a good message and a good song to go with the sort of message that it is. I think you chose a inspiring song and it was good to see what sort of pictures you thought went with the lyrics. I liked the message you chose and think you did a good job in presenting your moving image.
ReplyDeleteI don't think the music suited this song very well, but it could be because I've heard the real song and the music isn't similar to it. In one slide, you missed some words; You typed: 'Do you ever feel buried six feet under?' instead of: 'Do you ever feel already buried deep? Six feet under'. Also, most of your slide's writing is a bit too small. One of your slides pictures didn't really suit the lyrics: 'As you shoot across the sky-y-y' with the leaf background. All of the other lyrics suited the image. This song had a great message that you tried really hard to express, and you succeeded. The two slides in the first verse where you used dark blue writing, it was sort of hard to read in some areas of the screen.
ReplyDeleteI think that this song is a good song to do as it has a good message. I am not sure about the music. Some of the images didn´t match the words, but most of them did. The words didn´t really stand up against some images, but otherwise, the video was good.
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