I think you have done really well. Some of the slides were hard to read or I could only read two or three words on the screen. Why did you choose this poem?
I think that your moving image was at a good pace at the start but then it just went before your eyes before you could read it all. Some words weren't on the page when I read it. I think your music was really upbeat which was nice. I didn't know why you chose this ballad which I was hoping to find out at the end but there was nothing. I also in some slides I couldn't really see the writing clearly just faintly. Overall I think next time you should double check everything and go over everything even the smallest detail as that can make a big impact.
I think you have done really well. Some of the slides were hard to read or I could only read two or three words on the screen. Why did you choose this poem?
ReplyDeleteThis is a well done poem but the music didn't fit the words and one of the slides, the words didn't fit onto the screen.
ReplyDeleteYour film is amazing! To make it even better you could of added a slide about why you chose the ballad and why you thought it was a good poem.
ReplyDeleteI think that your moving image was at a good pace at the start but then it just went before your eyes before you could read it all. Some words weren't on the page when I read it. I think your music was really upbeat which was nice. I didn't know why you chose this ballad which I was hoping to find out at the end but there was nothing. I also in some slides I couldn't really see the writing clearly just faintly. Overall I think next time you should double check everything and go over everything even the smallest detail as that can make a big impact.
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